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Bennett
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PostSubject: just a peice of writing i did hope you enjoy   just a peice of writing i did hope you enjoy I_icon_minitimeSun Jan 31, 2010 8:24 pm

this is just something i came up with i'm thinking of putting it in the middle of another story i'm working on
anyway here it is
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She tried to yell for help but the words caught in her throat. She took a deep breath and called out again but her words strong as they were, were lost in the wind. Being carried carelessly away to crash into the trees that stood like statues watching over the road.
Crash just like Sabrina's car had into the ditch. And still with all this going on she knew. She knew long before the ambulance arrived and the tow truck hauled the crushed Chevy out of the moat, she knew before the parametic came over and took her chilled hand in his and told her the news as he stared into her glassy eyes. She knew that Sabrina was dead.
She just couldn't imagine it. Not as the doctor put a cast on her broken arm that lay limp at her side. And not as she sat motionless in her hospital bed staring at nothing. There was no way Sabrina was dead. Not Sabrina, her Sabrina, her best friend who had always been the bold, brash one and who'd always stood up for her. She couldn't imagine er gone. Gone forever. Those words that thought huanted her day and night like a spirit, Sabrina's spirit.
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i know it's a bit weird but hope you enjoy! just a peice of writing i did hope you enjoy 587366
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PostSubject: Re: just a peice of writing i did hope you enjoy   just a peice of writing i did hope you enjoy I_icon_minitimeFri Feb 12, 2010 6:10 pm

wow. this is really good. id love to read the rest of the story.
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PostSubject: Re: just a peice of writing i did hope you enjoy   just a peice of writing i did hope you enjoy I_icon_minitimeWed Feb 24, 2010 6:57 pm

Are you going to write a continuation? Biecause I think you should.
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PostSubject: Re: just a peice of writing i did hope you enjoy   just a peice of writing i did hope you enjoy I_icon_minitimeThu Mar 11, 2010 7:58 pm

Thanks. i was thinking of going on if anyone wanted to read it but im not sure:)
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PostSubject: Re: just a peice of writing i did hope you enjoy   just a peice of writing i did hope you enjoy I_icon_minitimeFri Mar 12, 2010 3:31 am

You should. I really want to know what will happen next and so do other people. Just go with what comes naturally.
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PostSubject: Re: just a peice of writing i did hope you enjoy   just a peice of writing i did hope you enjoy I_icon_minitimeFri Mar 12, 2010 2:12 pm

you should definitely continue!
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Please Sad ~Begs~
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PostSubject: Re: just a peice of writing i did hope you enjoy   just a peice of writing i did hope you enjoy I_icon_minitimeTue Jun 08, 2010 7:44 pm

I've started writing more so I'm trying to continue
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PostSubject: Re: just a peice of writing i did hope you enjoy   just a peice of writing i did hope you enjoy I_icon_minitimeTue Jun 08, 2010 8:20 pm

Yay, I posted new stuff, but they are continuous so they are not short.
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PostSubject: Re: just a peice of writing i did hope you enjoy   just a peice of writing i did hope you enjoy I_icon_minitimeMon Oct 25, 2010 3:38 pm

I too hope you'll continue this (:
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